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©2007-2009 ~shanraii
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I am again reminded of why I hate drawing people when they're young. And why I love Jack White and his difficult face. :shakefist:

For the "100 Themes Challenge"
#49 - Stripes.

Although, it's not really stripes. It's more of a Stripe.

If you don't recognize him, it's becuase he was something like fourteen in the picture I drew him from.

As always, I'm open to hearing critique and comments as always.

B2-B8 graphite pencils on printer paper.

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It looks good to me. :)

I would have actually made a stronger contour around the shirt to set it off against the background more, but then again this could have been a choice you made.

I don't know the kid, but everything looks like it's where it should be. You did a good job I'd say :)

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"I have only just begun to tell my story. What you see is only a glimpse of what I will be. I am just a falling ray, waiting to bounce back. When I do, I will be brilliant"

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:iconshanraii:
Thanks Ray.
So, you mean to up th e contrast between the shirt and the background?
Yeah, you're right. I'll try that and see how it looks.
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:iconrayfalling:
Well not much, all you have to do is make a line around the shirt. It doesnt have to be too obvious, but right now the shirt looks blurred, almost unfinished if you know what I mean. :)
I think a sharper contour would help, but that's just me. Wouldn't want you to ruin the original 0_0

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"I have only just begun to tell my story. What you see is only a glimpse of what I will be. I am just a falling ray, waiting to bounce back. When I do, I will be brilliant"

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:iconshanraii:
ok.
For sure I'll try it out : D

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When you have insomnia, you're never really asleep...and you're never really awake.
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~swimboy5002
:iconrayfalling:
Sweet. In the mean time I'll come up with other things you could do for me...Like, make me a sandwich woman! :giggle:

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"I have only just begun to tell my story. What you see is only a glimpse of what I will be. I am just a falling ray, waiting to bounce back. When I do, I will be brilliant"

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:iconrebeltoanything:
he's girlie. But i like
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:iconshanraii:
Thanks.
Yeah. He's pretty fem.
But at the same time....not.
I like his face. It's interesting.

--
When you have insomnia, you're never really asleep...and you're never really awake.
--
~swimboy5002
:iconshanraii:
*surries to the kitchen*
On white bread or whole wheat?
Bolognia or Ham?
Mustard or Ketchup?

--
When you have insomnia, you're never really asleep...and you're never really awake.
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~swimboy5002
:iconrayfalling:
If you even have to ask after our 50 years of marriage, then I'm not sure you know me at all ;_;

*drama*

:giggle:

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"I have only just begun to tell my story. What you see is only a glimpse of what I will be. I am just a falling ray, waiting to bounce back. When I do, I will be brilliant"

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:iconshanraii:
I know. I'm a horrible wife!

How about we just order pizza?

--
When you have insomnia, you're never really asleep...and you're never really awake.
--
~swimboy5002

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